Once again I'm joining the delightful LGBTQ+ writers of RainbowSnippets. Here are six sentences showcasing another pair of lovers in turmoil.
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| View From My Floating Desk |
Story snippet:
At that I threw myself into
her arms. Her knocked out breath took the form of laughter. I kissed it away.
“I thought you didn’t want…”
“Shut up and make love to
me.”
“Okay.”
“Okay.”
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I hope you enjoyed it!
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Best line ever, can't go wrong with that direction. :)
ReplyDeleteYou're very kind. Thank you!
DeleteI have to agree, can't go wrong there, and nice that they're (at last) on the same page. :)
ReplyDeleteFor now, anyway. Hahaha... Be well!
DeleteYeah, I'm struggling with a sex scene, I wish my guys just came out and said it that way, instead of the massive lead up.
ReplyDeleteHahaha... I feel for you. ~grin~ Be well!
DeleteOh that response made me laugh "okay" :D So sweet and playful. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteThank you! I am glad you approve.
DeleteHard to say no to a request like that.
ReplyDeleteI agree. ~grin~ Be well!
DeleteSometimes it's that simple. Well done.
ReplyDeleteHave a fabulous weekend, Darla. ♥
Thank you! I hope your day is going well. Take care!
DeleteWell done :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, my friend! It's always nice to find your kind comments.
DeleteWhatever the problem was, it's solved!
ReplyDeleteThey take it moment by moment. ~grin~ Be well!
DeleteBeing from a puritan upbringing in a religious cult, I still cringe at open talk of sex of any sort.
ReplyDeleteAw, I'm sorry for making your uncomfortable. I'll move these snippets to my other blog. ~nods~ It's no big deal. Be well!
DeleteHeh, great comeback! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you! Be well, my dear.
DeleteA very, very short snippet, eh?
ReplyDeleteShort as you on a horse, I guess.
DeleteSix sentences.
DeleteGreat dynamic. Now I'm wondering how they got to this point. :-)
ReplyDeleteWhat she said! LOL - just perfect. :)
ReplyDeleteWhat a sweet scene :)
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