Saturday, June 30, 2018

Rainbow Snippet for June 30th and July 1st


Welcome to another installment of Rainbow Snippets! I hope everyone is seeing a joyful conclusion to Pride month, though it’s always a good time of year to address issues facing members and friends of the LGBTQIA+ community. Meanwhile, I hope you’ll visit other writers on our Rainbow Snippets Facebook page. There are many talents represented, and I’m grateful they welcomed me to their ranks.

As promised, I got my characters back together, though their reunion is awkward, to say the least. In this bit of conversation, a classic fear of commitment is addressed, along with a mention of intimacy. If you don’t mind reading such things, please enjoy!

Story:

“Do you remember the first time we had sex in your bathroom?”

“Um…”

“Seeing my razor next to your toothbrush freaked you out.”

“Huh?”

“It ruined your orgasm,” he replied, provocative words falling flat. “And you couldn’t get me back to bed fast enough.”

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Do you think these two have a shot, with one communicative and the other, well… not so much?

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22 comments:

  1. Perhaps that's why sex in the bathroom is a bad idea?

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    1. No, no no. ~grin~ Sex anywhere is good. Thank you for the smile.

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  2. Hah, this is sweet, touching, and funny at the same time, yet very easy to relate to. Sometimes it's the little things that really bring things home for us.

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  3. I think they have a shot, they would balance one another.

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    1. Great way of thinking! I tend to agree, and keep writing this couple. ~grin~ Be well!

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  4. wow..one of those cloud sort of look like a bird.
    Coffee is on

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  5. HAHA....oh my gosh! Do you write from experience? haha...

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  6. Agreed that they have a shot at things for sure. Just need to work at it.

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    1. Thanks! In a story I just wrapped up they hit yet another rough patch. They're so fun to write! Be well.

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  7. Too funny! Love the details.

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  8. Fun snippet. I hope they have a shot. Opposite personalities can balance each other nicely, but if one isn't communicating (beyond simple shyness), that could spell trouble ahead! ๐Ÿ˜♡

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  9. Oh dear, hope they're not on two separate pages here.

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    1. Thank you! These two often are, but seem to find the same paragraph at days end. ~grin~ Be well!

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  10. Fun snippet - I think they have a chance :)

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  11. Fun snippet! I hope they have a chance!

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