Saturday, April 7, 2018

Rainbow Snippet April 7th and 8th

Once again I'm joining the delightful LGBTQ+ writers of RainbowSnippets. Here are six sentences showcasing another pair of lovers in turmoil.


View From My Floating Desk

Story snippet:

At that I threw myself into her arms. Her knocked out breath took the form of laughter. I kissed it away.

“I thought you didn’t want…”

“Shut up and make love to me.” 

“Okay.”

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I hope you enjoyed it!

#rainbowsnippets
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26 comments:

  1. Best line ever, can't go wrong with that direction. :)

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  2. I have to agree, can't go wrong there, and nice that they're (at last) on the same page. :)

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  3. Yeah, I'm struggling with a sex scene, I wish my guys just came out and said it that way, instead of the massive lead up.

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    1. Hahaha... I feel for you. ~grin~ Be well!

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  4. Oh that response made me laugh "okay" :D So sweet and playful. Loved it.

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  5. Hard to say no to a request like that.

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  6. Sometimes it's that simple. Well done.

    Have a fabulous weekend, Darla. ♥

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    1. Thank you! I hope your day is going well. Take care!

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    1. Thank you, my friend! It's always nice to find your kind comments.

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  8. Whatever the problem was, it's solved!

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    1. They take it moment by moment. ~grin~ Be well!

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  9. Being from a puritan upbringing in a religious cult, I still cringe at open talk of sex of any sort.

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    1. Aw, I'm sorry for making your uncomfortable. I'll move these snippets to my other blog. ~nods~ It's no big deal. Be well!

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  10. A very, very short snippet, eh?

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  11. Great dynamic. Now I'm wondering how they got to this point. :-)

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  12. What she said! LOL - just perfect. :)

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